Sean
"I'm a masseuse," she answers with a small smile, and I stop in momentary shock.
Oh no fucking way! I think once I can start thinking again. She starts laughing.
"I love watching guys' reactions when I tell them that," she purrs with a big grin on her face.
I swallow. My mouth had gone dry. "Well, can you blame us? That's fucking hot." I watch her closely for her reaction.
"It's a job." She shrugs. "One that I do well."
I have to change the subject before I come in my pants. It's been way too long for me. "So, I never learned your name."
"I never told you," she replies coyly.
"It would be nice if you did," I say and leave my statement hanging, waiting for her to tell me.
"It's Belinda," she says. "Now, are you going to tell me yours?"
"Sean," I tell her, and I see a momentary flash of some unidentifiable emotion cross her face before she immediately masks it with her pretty smile.
"Well Sean," she says and runs her finger down my cheek, "I need to visit the ladies' room. Don't go anywhere, k?"
I take the hand off my cheek and kiss her fingers as I say, "I'll be eagerly awaiting your return." She winks at me before she disappears in the crowd.
Maybe today won't turn out to be so bad after all.
Belinda
Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! I think in rapid succession once I get safely in the restroom. Is it? Is he the one Maggie was talking about yesterday? I pull out my phone and call Lynne.
Her voice sounds teasing when she answers, "I thought you were out hunting."
I ignore the banter she wants to start up, "What was the name of that guy Maggie was talking about? Erin's ex."
"Sean."
"Why?"
"He's here," I say, glad the bathroom is empty save for me. "I was just dancing with him." It has to be the right one. He matches Maggie's description now that I think about it. "I've been dumped," echoes in my head. Yep.
"Really," she says slowly, sounding like she's mulling something over. "Keep him there. I want to have some fun."
"What kind of fun?" I ask, knowing full well what she's capable of.
"Nothing he doesn't deserve. You're at Hurricane, right?"
"Why else would you call me?"
"So you can confirm my suspicions."
"And I did. And now I can't just sit here. I have to do something. Erin is one of us now, and he tried to hurt one of our own. He needs to learn a lesson."
"You're really scary sometimes, do you know that?" I ask her, holding the phone with both hands.
"Thanks, hun," she says and laughs. "Keep him there for me... in fact, go ahead and tell him a friend of yours is coming and that maybe we can all get a little friendly. He'll not be able to resist that."
I know nothing I could say would stop her. "All right, I guess."
"Good. I'll see you soon," she says and hangs up.
I actually feel a small amount of pity for this Sean guy. He's going to get a wake-up call tonight.
I walk out of the restroom and find Sean looking like a lost puppy without me.
Here goes. "Sorry I took so long," I say and press myself up against him. He doesn't mind in the slightest. "A friend of mine called while I was in there, and I told her about you. She wants to meet you too."
"A friend," he states like a question.
"A good friend," I purr suggestively and wonder if he's going to start drooling.
He recovers quickly enough, however, and says, "Well, if she's anything like you, I'd love to meet her." Then we start dancing again right where we stand.
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I must've fallen asleep because I wake up to Bryce kissing me again. However, this kiss isn't like last time. This time there's no pain behind it, and I'm glad.
He inhales through his nose while his hands run up my sides, lifting my shirt as he goes.
"Not sleeping, are you?" he asks huskily.
"Nope. Just a momentary slip into a blissful state of unconsciousness." I laugh at myself.
"You have been driving me insane all afternoon, you know," he states against my breast.
"Me?!" I ask, incredulous.
"Mmm. Yeah. I like this shirt. It looks nice on you. However, I've imagined how I would take it off of you every calm moment we've had this afternoon."
He must be able to sense my shift in mood as I think about the not-calm moments of this afternoon.
"But... Erin, are you okay?" he stops what he's doing and looks at me with a concerned expression.
"I could be better, I admit, but I'm not near as bad as you fear. In fact, I feel a little better now. Maybe he finally got the message."
"But you weren't okay when I came up here earlier..." He leaves his question/statement hanging.
"I hate being cruel, and it took a lot out of me," I say and run my fingers over his concerned forehead and then through his hair. "Don't cut your hair," I tell him, the subject change taking him by surprise.
He smiles, all traces of concern gone. "You like my hair?"
"Yes," I sigh. And your eyes. And your abs. And the way those jeans hang on you. And your lips. Damn, even the man's feet are sexy. I look up at my boyfriend and remind him, "You mentioned something about wanting to remove my shirt."
His eyes open, they'd closed while I ran my fingers through his hair, and he looks down at me with hunger in his eyes. "But I wanted to first make sure you're okay. ... not like last time."
"I liked last time," I whisper, and his expression darkens. Well, not after. Hm. That must be what he's talking about. "And I thought we fixed the misunderstanding afterwards."
"I want to make love to you," he says simply, obviously wishing to drop the subject of last time as he slowly peels my shirt off me. He tosses it to the floor before he adds very near my mouth, "Slowly."
One word. How does he do that with one word?! I shudder to think of Bryce's definition of 'slowly.' A small whimper escapes that gives away my thoughts. I wish I could take it back, but he definitely heard me.
I hear him chuckle quietly in his throat as he undoes the button on my shorts and pulls the zipper down. Then he sits up, and his eyes lock with mine as he pulls my shorts down and off. A wicked grin covers his features suddenly like he just got an idea. What is he thinking?
"After all," he says as calmly as he can manage, "I still haven't explored everywhere." He removes my sandals and licks the underside of my foot.
"Holy shit," I frantically whisper and try to pull my foot away. He's ready for me, however, and catches my ankle.
"Hm," he ponders while his other hand strokes the underside of my calf.
"Not my feet," I beg.
"Why not?" he asks.
"Feet are gross."
"Yours aren't," he says and sucks on the toe next to my big toe, taking it into his mouth and lightly biting it. I whimper loudly and try to get my foot free from his grasp again. "I think you like it," he says calmly after releasing my toe. "You just don't want to admit it." He reaches with his free hand and massages the skin around my pinky toe, and the sensation goes straight to my groin. "You like that, don't you?" he asks, and I want to kick him in the face except that would make the wonderful sensation stop.
"They're feet!" I rasp out, trying to regain control over my body that has betrayed me once again in this man's magic hands. "They're for walking on!" Preposition.
"Mhm. Feet are really quite interesting, did you know?" he says with irritating calm, still working the skin around my pinky toe with occasional licks and bites to other areas. "You can tie almost every part of the body to somewhere on the foot. So a good foot rub..." He applies the smallest amount of increase in pressure. "...can affect the entire body."
I whine loudly.
"Shh. You don't want to worry Adele."
"No fair!" I say and sit up to try to pry his hands off my feet before it's too late.
He looks up and grins at me. "Are you trying to fight me again, Erin?"
"Yes," I growl as I start clawing at his fingers, but I can't gain a good enough purchase. "They. Are. Feet. They're. Not. Sexy. Quit it!" I get out, getting steadily more aggravated as he starts laughing.
He releases my foot to take my face in his hands so he can kiss me. He pulls back before I expect him to, however, and says, "I love you."
"Not my feet," I repeat.
His eyes twinkle as he says, "I love your feet too."
"That's not what I meant!" I squeal as he laughs a little and pushes me back against the mattress, finally away from my feet. I don't trust him to stay up here though, so I hold his face in my hands now and kiss him.
"Erin," he pulls back to talk to me in a very amused voice, "there is not a place on your body that isn't sexy as hell." Then he attacks my earlobe.
I gasp and try to move away. Of course, he has a firm grip of my chin. "Bryce, please!" I can only get out as a loud whisper. It's too weird how much I like that.
He laughs quietly, and I can feel his breath against my throat as he says, "You stopped me from fully exploring your feet. I need some sort of consolation." I feel his lips on the skin behind my ear, and goosebumps break out all over me. "Oh, and Erin? I will finish that one day, even if I have to tie you up to do it."
I gasp and feel him smiling against my neck. "What?!" I squeak out.
"You heard me. I said it right into your ear after all," he says, acting distracted now as his hand travels down to the middle of the side of my torso.
Quickly, one of his hands lifts me a little while the other flies under me and my bra is undone in a little over two seconds... I think.
"Haven't lost your touch," I say with a smirk to his answering grin. I can't help but think of an Old West gunslinger practicing his quick draw.
"Well, I have to keep that skill up just in case," he says while lowering himself to kiss my stomach.
Where is he going? He'd better not be headed to my feet again... I think as he pulls down my undies. While he's down at my feet, I quickly pull my legs up to me.
"You make it so tempting." he says huskily. "I was going to leave your feet alone for tonight, but if you're going to deliberately try to keep them from me, then I'll have to rethink that."
"What?!" I squeak again. "No!"
Fast as lightning, he captures both of my ankles in his hands and presses my feet against the mattress next to each other, my knees bent. The laughter has left his eyes now as he locks his with mine and pulls my ankles apart. Then his hands travel up my shins, greedily spreading his fingers so that he can touch as much of me as possible. Oh no.
He leans down and slowly licks the inside of my thigh while his hand moves up the opposite one.
"Bryce..." I whisper, but he ignores my plea when his tongue strokes my clitoris.
"Ah!" I cry out, and he stops for a second.
"You're going to have Adele knocking on the door wondering what's wrong if you can't keep quiet," he says way too seriously.
"I can't keep quiet," I say with my eyes closed. Just looking at him where he is drives me crazy.
"So again, I'm denied what I want to do," he says in an admonishing tone. My mouth drops in shock when he says, "You're accruing quite a debt here, Erin."
"Me?" I ask, flabbergasted, as I watch him remove his pants. I pout when he finishes removing them.
He looks at me with a confused expression and asks, "What?"
"You never let me do that. You... distract me." He really wasn't wearing anything under those jeans, I think as I answer my earlier internal question.
The grin is back for a second before he says, "I like distracting you." His lips finally return to mine as he crouches over me. "Now," he asks, "can I trust you to be quiet?"
Why was that question hot? "I don't think I can. ...be quiet that is."
"Oh Erin," he says as he hovers just outside of me, "then you need to practice."
He enters me with agonizing slowness, sighing as he does so. Then he pulls almost all the way back out before doing it again. I have to bite my lip hard to do my best to keep quiet. He's driving me crazy. I just want him to stay more inside me! This full/empty/full/empty is going to make me scream in frustration soon if nothing else does.
I finally get his attention when I whimper loudly. "Too much?" he asks.
"Not enough more like," I say.
"Oh, you want more?" he asks playfully, still continuing with his ridiculous movements.
"Bryce!" I snap.
"Damn, this feels so good though," he says, obviously enjoying my aggravation.
"At first! But..."
"I said 'slowly' after all." He grins. "Is there something else you wanted?"
I have a sudden fantasy about clawing his eyes out.
Finally, he stays fully inside of me and moves in small, intense circles before he asks, "Like this?"
"Mmm hmmm," I whimper.
"Shit, I can tell," he groans before lowering his mouth to my neck where he kisses and occasionally bites me.
What I enjoyed a few minutes ago slowly starts to irritate the hell out of me. Plus, I'm worried about my neck.
"Bryce..." I pant, "if you leave a mark on my neck," I let out a low groan when he picks up the speed for only a few seconds before slowing down again, "you're going to regret it."
He picks up his head and smiles a little down at me before he asks, "I am?"
"Yes."
"Again, you make it so tempting."
Shit, what has come over him?!
"Bryce..." I say, and I hate the sound of my whining. He merely laughs quietly, and he still won't effing speed up! I growl and grab large fistfuls of his hair.
"Ow!" he quietly exclaims. "I thought you liked my hair! Why are you trying to pull it out by the roots?"
"Speed... up!" I growl. I was never this communicative with Sean during sex, but somehow, Bryce brings it out of me.
He shakes his head. "No. I said... slowly." I start to let out a high-pitched, enraged sound that he quickly silences by kissing me. "Shh!" he says once he releases my lips again.
"No! Bryce, I can't take this. Not and be quiet at the same time!" I pant.
"You've done well so far," he says and grins down at me.
I squeeze my eyes tight and tilt my head back as I let out another whine.
"Take it, Erin, please. You're so fucking beautiful, and this feels so damn good," he mumbles breathily to me into my neck as he continues with his torturous movements. I start trying on my own to go faster, but he holds my hips steady with one hand as he says, "Oh no you don't. Now, be good. Dammit Erin, trust me and stop fighting it."
I let out a shaky breath and try. Torturous pleasure radiates from my center to every part of my body until I want to scream. He has absolutely no intention of speeding up... probably at all, I think with another whimper as he gently encourages me to continue to keep myself from fighting him and what he's doing to me. I hadn't even realized what he meant by 'fighting' until I stopped doing it.
I allow the sensations to take over and consume every thought, blotting out everything else in the universe except what we're sharing.
I've reached some sort of plateau, and I do my best to keep my cry from being too loud. Bryce whispers something or other that I don't understand as he takes the tempo up only a fraction.
The pleasure still builds too slowly for me to handle while my breathing sounds coarse and ragged and going to fast. Oh. Oh, I can't stand it!
"Come on, baby," he whispers, and finally, it forces my body to succumb. He places his hand over my mouth to muffle the noise I can't help but make as he joins me in this powerful climax.
Sex with this man can never just be 'normal' I guess, I think vaguely while I've started slowly coming back to earth.
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Erin
I must've fallen asleep because I wake up to Bryce kissing me again. However, this kiss isn't like last time. This time there's no pain behind it, and I'm glad.
He inhales through his nose while his hands run up my sides, lifting my shirt as he goes.
"Not sleeping, are you?" he asks huskily.
"Nope. Just a momentary slip into a blissful state of unconsciousness." I laugh at myself.
"You have been driving me insane all afternoon, you know," he states against my breast.
"Me?!" I ask, incredulous.
"Mmm. Yeah. I like this shirt. It looks nice on you. However, I've imagined how I would take it off of you every calm moment we've had this afternoon."
He must be able to sense my shift in mood as I think about the not-calm moments of this afternoon.
"But... Erin, are you okay?" he stops what he's doing and looks at me with a concerned expression.
"I could be better, I admit, but I'm not near as bad as you fear. In fact, I feel a little better now. Maybe he finally got the message."
"But you weren't okay when I came up here earlier..." He leaves his question/statement hanging.
"I hate being cruel, and it took a lot out of me," I say and run my fingers over his concerned forehead and then through his hair. "Don't cut your hair," I tell him, the subject change taking him by surprise.
He smiles, all traces of concern gone. "You like my hair?"
"Yes," I sigh. And your eyes. And your abs. And the way those jeans hang on you. And your lips. Damn, even the man's feet are sexy. I look up at my boyfriend and remind him, "You mentioned something about wanting to remove my shirt."
His eyes open, they'd closed while I ran my fingers through his hair, and he looks down at me with hunger in his eyes. "But I wanted to first make sure you're okay. ... not like last time."
"I liked last time," I whisper, and his expression darkens. Well, not after. Hm. That must be what he's talking about. "And I thought we fixed the misunderstanding afterwards."
"I want to make love to you," he says simply, obviously wishing to drop the subject of last time as he slowly peels my shirt off me. He tosses it to the floor before he adds very near my mouth, "Slowly."
One word. How does he do that with one word?! I shudder to think of Bryce's definition of 'slowly.' A small whimper escapes that gives away my thoughts. I wish I could take it back, but he definitely heard me.
I hear him chuckle quietly in his throat as he undoes the button on my shorts and pulls the zipper down. Then he sits up, and his eyes lock with mine as he pulls my shorts down and off. A wicked grin covers his features suddenly like he just got an idea. What is he thinking?
"After all," he says as calmly as he can manage, "I still haven't explored everywhere." He removes my sandals and licks the underside of my foot.
"Holy shit," I frantically whisper and try to pull my foot away. He's ready for me, however, and catches my ankle.
"Hm," he ponders while his other hand strokes the underside of my calf.
"Not my feet," I beg.
"Why not?" he asks.
"Feet are gross."
"Yours aren't," he says and sucks on the toe next to my big toe, taking it into his mouth and lightly biting it. I whimper loudly and try to get my foot free from his grasp again. "I think you like it," he says calmly after releasing my toe. "You just don't want to admit it." He reaches with his free hand and massages the skin around my pinky toe, and the sensation goes straight to my groin. "You like that, don't you?" he asks, and I want to kick him in the face except that would make the wonderful sensation stop.
"They're feet!" I rasp out, trying to regain control over my body that has betrayed me once again in this man's magic hands. "They're for walking on!" Preposition.
"Mhm. Feet are really quite interesting, did you know?" he says with irritating calm, still working the skin around my pinky toe with occasional licks and bites to other areas. "You can tie almost every part of the body to somewhere on the foot. So a good foot rub..." He applies the smallest amount of increase in pressure. "...can affect the entire body."
I whine loudly.
"Shh. You don't want to worry Adele."
"No fair!" I say and sit up to try to pry his hands off my feet before it's too late.
He looks up and grins at me. "Are you trying to fight me again, Erin?"
"Yes," I growl as I start clawing at his fingers, but I can't gain a good enough purchase. "They. Are. Feet. They're. Not. Sexy. Quit it!" I get out, getting steadily more aggravated as he starts laughing.
He releases my foot to take my face in his hands so he can kiss me. He pulls back before I expect him to, however, and says, "I love you."
"Not my feet," I repeat.
His eyes twinkle as he says, "I love your feet too."
"That's not what I meant!" I squeal as he laughs a little and pushes me back against the mattress, finally away from my feet. I don't trust him to stay up here though, so I hold his face in my hands now and kiss him.
"Erin," he pulls back to talk to me in a very amused voice, "there is not a place on your body that isn't sexy as hell." Then he attacks my earlobe.
I gasp and try to move away. Of course, he has a firm grip of my chin. "Bryce, please!" I can only get out as a loud whisper. It's too weird how much I like that.
He laughs quietly, and I can feel his breath against my throat as he says, "You stopped me from fully exploring your feet. I need some sort of consolation." I feel his lips on the skin behind my ear, and goosebumps break out all over me. "Oh, and Erin? I will finish that one day, even if I have to tie you up to do it."
I gasp and feel him smiling against my neck. "What?!" I squeak out.
"You heard me. I said it right into your ear after all," he says, acting distracted now as his hand travels down to the middle of the side of my torso.
Quickly, one of his hands lifts me a little while the other flies under me and my bra is undone in a little over two seconds... I think.
"Haven't lost your touch," I say with a smirk to his answering grin. I can't help but think of an Old West gunslinger practicing his quick draw.
"Well, I have to keep that skill up just in case," he says while lowering himself to kiss my stomach.
Where is he going? He'd better not be headed to my feet again... I think as he pulls down my undies. While he's down at my feet, I quickly pull my legs up to me.
"You make it so tempting." he says huskily. "I was going to leave your feet alone for tonight, but if you're going to deliberately try to keep them from me, then I'll have to rethink that."
"What?!" I squeak again. "No!"
Fast as lightning, he captures both of my ankles in his hands and presses my feet against the mattress next to each other, my knees bent. The laughter has left his eyes now as he locks his with mine and pulls my ankles apart. Then his hands travel up my shins, greedily spreading his fingers so that he can touch as much of me as possible. Oh no.
He leans down and slowly licks the inside of my thigh while his hand moves up the opposite one.
"Bryce..." I whisper, but he ignores my plea when his tongue strokes my clitoris.
"Ah!" I cry out, and he stops for a second.
"You're going to have Adele knocking on the door wondering what's wrong if you can't keep quiet," he says way too seriously.
"I can't keep quiet," I say with my eyes closed. Just looking at him where he is drives me crazy.
"So again, I'm denied what I want to do," he says in an admonishing tone. My mouth drops in shock when he says, "You're accruing quite a debt here, Erin."
"Me?" I ask, flabbergasted, as I watch him remove his pants. I pout when he finishes removing them.
He looks at me with a confused expression and asks, "What?"
"You never let me do that. You... distract me." He really wasn't wearing anything under those jeans, I think as I answer my earlier internal question.
The grin is back for a second before he says, "I like distracting you." His lips finally return to mine as he crouches over me. "Now," he asks, "can I trust you to be quiet?"
Why was that question hot? "I don't think I can. ...be quiet that is."
"Oh Erin," he says as he hovers just outside of me, "then you need to practice."
He enters me with agonizing slowness, sighing as he does so. Then he pulls almost all the way back out before doing it again. I have to bite my lip hard to do my best to keep quiet. He's driving me crazy. I just want him to stay more inside me! This full/empty/full/empty is going to make me scream in frustration soon if nothing else does.
I finally get his attention when I whimper loudly. "Too much?" he asks.
"Not enough more like," I say.
"Oh, you want more?" he asks playfully, still continuing with his ridiculous movements.
"Bryce!" I snap.
"Damn, this feels so good though," he says, obviously enjoying my aggravation.
"At first! But..."
"I said 'slowly' after all." He grins. "Is there something else you wanted?"
I have a sudden fantasy about clawing his eyes out.
Finally, he stays fully inside of me and moves in small, intense circles before he asks, "Like this?"
"Mmm hmmm," I whimper.
"Shit, I can tell," he groans before lowering his mouth to my neck where he kisses and occasionally bites me.
What I enjoyed a few minutes ago slowly starts to irritate the hell out of me. Plus, I'm worried about my neck.
"Bryce..." I pant, "if you leave a mark on my neck," I let out a low groan when he picks up the speed for only a few seconds before slowing down again, "you're going to regret it."
He picks up his head and smiles a little down at me before he asks, "I am?"
"Yes."
"Again, you make it so tempting."
Shit, what has come over him?!
"Bryce..." I say, and I hate the sound of my whining. He merely laughs quietly, and he still won't effing speed up! I growl and grab large fistfuls of his hair.
"Ow!" he quietly exclaims. "I thought you liked my hair! Why are you trying to pull it out by the roots?"
"Speed... up!" I growl. I was never this communicative with Sean during sex, but somehow, Bryce brings it out of me.
He shakes his head. "No. I said... slowly." I start to let out a high-pitched, enraged sound that he quickly silences by kissing me. "Shh!" he says once he releases my lips again.
"No! Bryce, I can't take this. Not and be quiet at the same time!" I pant.
"You've done well so far," he says and grins down at me.
I squeeze my eyes tight and tilt my head back as I let out another whine.
"Take it, Erin, please. You're so fucking beautiful, and this feels so damn good," he mumbles breathily to me into my neck as he continues with his torturous movements. I start trying on my own to go faster, but he holds my hips steady with one hand as he says, "Oh no you don't. Now, be good. Dammit Erin, trust me and stop fighting it."
I let out a shaky breath and try. Torturous pleasure radiates from my center to every part of my body until I want to scream. He has absolutely no intention of speeding up... probably at all, I think with another whimper as he gently encourages me to continue to keep myself from fighting him and what he's doing to me. I hadn't even realized what he meant by 'fighting' until I stopped doing it.
I allow the sensations to take over and consume every thought, blotting out everything else in the universe except what we're sharing.
I've reached some sort of plateau, and I do my best to keep my cry from being too loud. Bryce whispers something or other that I don't understand as he takes the tempo up only a fraction.
The pleasure still builds too slowly for me to handle while my breathing sounds coarse and ragged and going to fast. Oh. Oh, I can't stand it!
"Come on, baby," he whispers, and finally, it forces my body to succumb. He places his hand over my mouth to muffle the noise I can't help but make as he joins me in this powerful climax.
Sex with this man can never just be 'normal' I guess, I think vaguely while I've started slowly coming back to earth.













Oh my you write these things so well, I would never dare.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for whatever Lynn has in store for Sean. Erin and Bryce were almost a distraction...almost.
Thank you. I look backon it, and I still can't believe I wrote that. Just have to have that frame of mind I guess.
DeleteLynne has the capability to be very dangerous. >:)
Like Bryce said, ''I like distracting you.'' Lol!
Thanks for reading, Karleen!
I hope Sean gets what is coming to him. I can't wait to see. I wonder what Erin will say when she finds out what they did to him. Hope it makes her smile
ReplyDeleteWell, whatever happens, Sean is in for a surprise! Hehe, I'll try to get it done before next week. I'm still somewhat debating how I'm going to handle this. I wrote it out, but I don't know if I like it.
DeleteLOL, I think Erin's almost ready to do whatever it takes to get rid of that ex of hers. :)
Thanks for reading, Lucky!
*fans self* Holy crap...
ReplyDeleteOh, I think I'm gunna love Belinda and Lynne :D Can't wait to see what they do! Sean, I think you're about to get your comeuppance...
A sexy masseuse, eh? And I'm guessing by Lynn's comment about her being out 'hunting', that she's a bit of a free spirit too, if ya no what a mean... *wiggles eyebrows*
Phew, very naughty Bryce this chapter! Poor Erin! LOL, there's a fine line between love and hate, Bryce, don't you know that?
I'm with Erin on the feet. I'd never let my boyfriend touch my feet, I'm extremely ticklish in most places so don't want to imagine what that would feel like. Plus, yes, ew, they're feet. As Erin rightly said; they're for walking. I probably would have just kicked him in the face. Completely by accident, just a reaction, but he'd have deserved it.
I hope Bryce didn't leave any hickeys behind, I mean, he's not in highschool, and they're just embarrassing when you're an adult :p
And... Now whenever I see Bryce I'm going to imagine him as a 'wild west gunslinger'... Thanks, Erin... :| Although, I did lol at that.
Well done! You should be a professional smut writer :p
The worst bit (well, the only bad bit) about this was that I saw you'd posted it when I was just about to head out the door to the post office, and then I came home and had to hang the washing out, and the whole time I was giggling to myself wondering what was going to happen. It was like torture (not the same kind of torture Erin was going though, worse.)
Oh, and:
Delete"And now I can't just sit here. I have to do something. Erin is one of us now, and he tried to hurt one of our own. He needs to learn a lesson."
<3 I love that she's protected by the girls the same as Bryce is, even though they barely know her :D
WOAH! HANG ON!!!
Delete(Sorry, things keep popping into my head)
I just noticed something about the last Belinda/Sean picture... But... I dunno if it's an accident... O.O
I feel obligated to tell you that, sorry, Belinda is a plain, boring human ... with a great singing voice. ;) hehe, sorry for the ?red herring? I guess. I wanted her to have long nails even if that doesn't exactly suit herjob maybe, and now that I read that Lynne said 'hunting' ,I created some possible confusion. She and Lynne has a running gag about who's going to wind up the spinster cat lady.
DeleteI'll answer the other bit later. :-)
Um... I'm a little confused...
DeleteI knew she was a human ('cus I'm psychic) I had no way of... Singing voice... *brain creaks into life and looks confused*
Yeah, she's allowed long nails. I didn't assume she was a prostitute, if that's what you mean? And by hunting I assumed she meant hunting for someone to spend the night with.
Later?! *screams*
*swears*
*cries*
*dies*
Oh, okay, then I misunderstood. I was thinking some might think she's a werewolf or something. LOL
DeleteI finally figured out what you were talking about. I did the wrong guy!!! I've fixed it. I'm just so used to that guy I used doing posing because he's one of my 'models' for my poses.
DeleteLynne sometimes scares Belinda. Lynne has a vindictive side to her that Erin got to see for a few minutes that Saturday morning after the first party. Sean might get a little scared too.
Hehe, I loved writing Sean's reaction to Belinda's job. I almost have pity on him... almost. And then, yes, she's a bit of a free spirit, but similar to Jesse, she's still looking for 'the one'. Until then, why not have some fun?! :)
'A fine line between love and hate'? You mean she'd hate him for messing with her feet? Deliberately getting under her skin (lol a pun if you get it) with all the slow?
LOL I hate feet, but I've been in situations like that before and hate to admit I liked it. /blushes. I have a sister than loves to tease me about her feet. I don't know what it is about them, but they freak me out.
I would've kicked him in the face if he hadn't have had the other foot's toes under his knees. mkay... stopping there.
Hehe, remember Bryce said once, "Like I'd mar this beautiful neck." Nah, he just got in the moment a little. He still had fun making her worry though.
That gunslinger thing... I have no idea where that came from, but it makes sense, doesn't it? :D Yeap, cowboy Bryce.
Okay maybe not as such. LOL
Sorry about that! I had to release it a few hours earlier than my usual release time bracket thingy because my kid had a doctor's appointment.
Lynne really likes Erin because of the change she sees in Bryce. He has real smiles now, not forced ... or leers kinda. So, yeah, if anyone is going to mess up anything about anyone she loves, they're in for a rude awakening. Maybe some other rude stuff too.
Thanks for reading, gemly!
Phew!! I did think 'that's an accident' at first, but then the more I read over the bit underneath I was like 'She said Sean looked lost without her... And then she doesn't mention his name again... Maybe Belinda is tricking Lynne... WHY?!' Lol, I didn't want to ay anything incase it wasn't an accident and we were supposed to notice :p
DeleteWell, the search for 'the one' can be a long one, so why stay single all that time? Everyone is entitled to fun, and sometimes 'the one' is someone you'd never have guessed...
Yes, the love/hate thing was aimed at the torturing Bryce was doing.
My boyfriend has 'sideways toes' as I call them. It sounds awful... Lol, I mean his little toes are 100% straight, and it freaks me out because mine are. He constantly shoves them in my face at every opportunity, and then when I try to fight him off he tickles me so I can't do anything. (Remember what I said about love/hate?)
Soo.. Cowboy Bryce....
In my mind, he's wearing a cowboy hat, and do you remember the trousers Christina Aguilera wore in her 'dirty' music video...
So Lynne is kinda like an overprotective big sister? I like that. I'm not saying Pam couldn't protect Bryce, but she's settled down and has her own little family to think of, whereas Lynne has plenty of time to stick up for her friends :)
"Maybe some other rude stuff too" - Hmm... Like what...? :|
I can't wait to see the girls do a number on Sean >:D
Thanks for writing, mypal ;)
A friend of mine had to have her toes surgically fixed because they'd gone too sideways. She said it came from wearing too-small shoes, mostly while she was growing up. Not saying that's his problem. It just reminded me.
DeleteThat video has an age warning! O.O I'd not ever seen it before. LOL I don't want to imagine Bryce in those pants. I'm going to pee myself from laughing. Thanks. Now I have stripper Bryce in my head. OMG! No! Stop! :P
Exactly, Pam and Lynne kind of tag-team each other at times, but Pam is busy being wife and mother so she doesn't respond as often. Sean would've been better to piss Pam off and not Lynne. Lynne has more free time, and that can be dangerous.
You're just gonna have to wait. hehe.
:P I like putting that tag at the end.
EW! TOO MUCH INFORMATION!!
DeleteIt does? I was just remembering it from my childhood when it was all over TV. Definitely fine to play it to whoever back then...
But LOLLL! :p
Then just need to throw in that firemans pole...
(I'm sorry, I don't know what's wrong with me... O.O)
Lol, ok. I now know for future referance that if I want to sneak past Lynne I need to keep her occupied with something.
I refuse to wait. "TAXI!"
TMI? Really? I could've told you in more detail actually. :P
Delete*covers eyes*
you think you could sneak past Lynne? hehe.
Hi, I'm writing this from the back seat of a rowing boat crossing the Atlantic. I probably won't be there for a few weeks, and I now realise that I should have just waited for an update at home in the warm. My laptop is getting very wet and probably won't last until you post next...
DeleteNo, please, just the fact that someone has toes is too much.
Uh... No... I probably couldn't. PleaseDon'tHurtMeLynne!!
O.o
DeleteA row boat? So you're saying that if I don't get the next update out at a reasonable time that you're going to hunt me down? :P
Yes, it's the toes that make feet weird.
Hehe, Lynne is really really nice unless you piss her off. Well, most people are, aren't they? She just takes her pissed off to an extreme.
I already am hunting you down...
DeleteEw, yes, toes. They're like stubby fingers.
Lol, yes, there are the occasional few who are just never nice, but I don't think there's any the other way around. As in, really mean until you piss them off, when they turn really nice :p
That would be confusing!
I hope not too extreme!! :|
Mkay, you're scaring me. *runs away screaming* LOL
DeleteWho gets nice when you piss them off? Is that what you're saying? I'm totally lost now.
It's no use running.... *cackles*
DeleteNobody does, that was my point. I'm sorry. I made no sense. I'm a bit tired, and for my 'lunch' i had a whole bar of chocolate (dairy milk and oreo. Yum), so was on a bit of a sugar high when I wrote that :p
Oh, and also.
Delete" 39: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun "
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
Why isn't this clickable?!
So I just have a title to go on for God knows how long?
Do you always post little things like that? Or just when a crazed woman says she's rowing the ocean to get you? :p
I'm all for not making sense. Doped up on flu meds am I atm. My head is floating somewhere on the second story of my house so it's amazing I can see what I'm typing!
DeleteHehe, if I write it up and decide on a title, I go ahead and add it to the chapters tab to... yes... torture you. It's all for you.
Also, another freaking song title for a chapter title. CLJS bleeding over into my other stories.
What's worse... I don't know if I like what I wrote for the next chapter. I think it's odd, but I'm not going to do anything about it until I can think clearly once again.
Things like what? Maybe I already answered the question.
Oh no! Still? Hope you're better soon!
DeleteDo doctors give out stuff for flu over there? If we went to the doctors for flu over here and we weren't pregnant/elderly/had a pre-exisiting condition, they'd laugh at us! Haha, you can get stuff fro the shelves in the supermarket.
So, you're just out to torture me? I was going to turn this boat around, I'm not so sure anymore. I think I'm lost anyway, it's so dark....
Lol, I quite like that song! Not heard it in a few years.
I'm sure whatever it is is fine! And it's sims! Odd is fine :)
Lol, er... yeah... You answered the question in the paragraph above! I prescribe bedrest and chicken soup.
And yes, I have looked at the chapter list today. I swore out loud, and my boyfriend looked very confused. >:(
DeleteThought I was getting better today-- nope.
DeleteYeah, hubs went to doc thinking he had bronchitis or he wouldn't have gone. I'm just doing the over the counter or chicken n dumplings n stuff. Ramble warning: it is impossible for me to say chicken and dumplings. It's just wrong. Lol. *tries and cracks up*
Okay, well its a little different and maybe I'm making much ado about nothing here.
I giggled in sadistic mirth when I put that newest chapter title up. Going in to shoot pics so I might get that chapter out sooner rather than later as well.
I am curious what Lynne and Belinda are going to do to Sean. Bryce, HOT, as usual. :)
ReplyDeleteYou'll get to find out in the next chapter. I just hope I didn't go over the top. For some it won't, but it might shock others. It shocks ME that I wrote it.
DeleteI frequently have to remind myself that Bryce is just a sim. :)
Thanks for reading, LateKnight!
Well damn Bryce is full of tricks isn't he? That was crazy but I have to agree about the feet thing. Ewwww
ReplyDeleteWhat is Lynne up to? That island is small and he has made it around the rumor mill. He's in for some trouble but it should be fun to see what they do to him. LOL
And yeah I agree with gemly...what's up with the last shot of Sean and Belinda?
Mmhm, he's learned a trick or two.
DeleteI hate feet too. That scene came from ... you know sometimes when you get drunk and your first memory you have after waking up is something really weird that you'd never do otherwise? Yeah. I can't stand people touching my feet, and I'd prefer if they kept theirs to themselves. Oh, how my husband and sister love to tease me about it. Still, I had to put that in because it was so Bryce. :)
We're going to see Lynne's dark side... the side that scares Belinda. Hehe, rumor mill indeed! Those ladies hear all kinds of stuff while working at the spa. People get relaxed... people start talking. I've not finalized it yet, but the next chapter will push my limits. Nothing compared to Seth, but yeah.
I used the wrong dude. /cries. I'm used to using him for poses, so I didn't think and just grabbed him. gah!
Thanks for reading, jazen!
Gonna be fun to see what ever it is Lynne has cooked up for Sean! Can't wait! Oh, Bryce...a stallion AND a gunslinger!*fanning lol
ReplyDeleteLynne has a dark side to her that 'poor' Sean might just see tonight. I almost... kinda... feel sorry for him. maybe.
DeleteI cracked up laughing at the stallion bit. Build his ego even more, why don't you? :)
Thanks for reading, Diane!
Trying this for the second time! It seems blogger didn't take my comment the first time. *makes a threatening face at blogger*
ReplyDeleteOh where to begin!
Oh yeah, the feet! One more way for Erin and Bryce to spice up their already hot enough sex life. Don't know if I'd go the feet route though. Yuk. It must be an acquired taste. No, it's a fetish. Yep. Bryce has an "Erin feet" fetish.
LOL @ Belinda freaking out. I thought she'd faint from all the hyperventilating she did.
I like the idea of Sean getting what's coming to him, I just hope whatever Lynne and Belinda are planning doesn't backfire on them. These things have a way of blowing up in someone's face! And no, I'm not talking from experience, just from watching too many movies I guess.
It. Deleted. My. Reply. I. Am. So. Pissed. Off!
DeleteIt did this to me a lot last week too.
Now to remember what the heck I put...
Hehe, Bryce doesn't like doing things in a monotonous way, and he loves watching Erin's reactions. I hate feet myself. That scene comes from a memory.. I think I mentioned it in fb in one of Pixx's posts. Yeah, it's amazing what one will let happen when inebriated. >.>
LOL she was pretty freaked. She'd just gone out looking for a good time, and she wasn't expecting different parts of her life coming together the way they did.
I figured you would. :) Hm, there is a possibility it could backfire. Hopefully they can avoid any fallout. Lynne scares me sometimes.
Thanks for reading, Val!
~ First off has any one pointed out that the guy in blue is not Sean!(last pic of Sean with Belinda,in Sean's little part!But Belinda is not cuddling Sean,but mystery background guy!) Sorry photographic memory! He was in the back ground in the second picture,he has a Light Blue shirt & his Buzz cut is longer than Sean's, though the same colour hair!Sean has a Blue Camo hoodie on & his buzz cut is very short & different than the guy in Blue!!! I am sure he was in last weeks back ground too!Sorries!(delete this if you correct it!OKAYS!) ;)
ReplyDelete~ I do hope Sean gets whats coming to him too,he needs to know that his actions have consequences!(we all do!)
~ Sorry this will be short! Loves that Sean will get his! (",)
OMG! LMAO! I can't believe I screwed up like that!!!! I'm going to have to fix this.
DeleteHe does have a lot to learn, and Lynne has the ability to be a very effective 'teacher'. I've still not finalized everything because I just don't know if I want to cross certain lines.
DeleteNo prob! I'm glad everyone's looking forward to Sean getting his comeuppance.
Thanks for reading, Karima!
Alrighty. I fixed that picture for those that know what I'm talking about. Blue shirt. ugh. Plus, I'm used to posing him over and over because he's one of my pose models.
ReplyDelete/dies
Lol, it's ok, got my head spinning for a bit, but it's fine :)
Delete:) So it seems Sean is going to get his due and I can't wait to see what happens and how it is executed out. Oh my goodness, I could not have remained quiet during that kind of slow sensuous torture myself. I bet Erin will think of some way to get him back. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like Sean is gonna get what's coming to him, huh? This should be interesting. I have something written, but I don't know if I like it enough.
DeleteLOL quiet is hard.
Oh, of course, Erin will get him back. :)
Thanks for reading, ksmomma!
Whoaaa nellie! Looks like I walked in at just the right time. I'm going to have to back up and read some more of this :D
ReplyDeleteLMBO!!!!!
DeleteNeat! I hope you enjoy reading. :)
Wow!! **Blushing**
ReplyDeleteAnyway, can't wait to see what Belinda and Lynne have planned for Sean!!
Hehe, I blush too when I read back over this. Sometimes I can't believe I wrote what I wrote. o.O
DeleteOh, I'm having loads of fun with the next chapter. >:)
Thanks for reading!
Oh, yay. Last chapter I almost wondered in the comments if the mystery chick was Lynne going out to mess with Sean, but I looked at the pics in the side bar and realized it was someone new, so I didn't mention Lynne.
ReplyDeleteAnd, it's not Lynne,but she is going to fuck with Sean, and I'm really psyched for that. I really hope Lynne and Belinda do a number on him.
LOL, I don't mind being cruel one bit, I guess.
Also, woo, I'm caught up!
Hehe, nope it's our friendly neighborhood masseuse Belinda, but yes, Lynne is going to have a go at Sean it looks like. I'm stressing this next chapter almost as much as the Hurricane one where everyone beat up on Sean. As it stands right now, I cross lines that I haven't crossed yet ever, and I don't know if I can handle that. But, obviously you don't have a problem with those lines with the cruel comment. :)
DeleteNope, sorry erin, we prefer you have kinky hot sex, get used to it. Although i' m with everyone on the feet...kinda ick. Had a boyfriend once with a for real foot fetish...was kinda odd.
ReplyDeleteYeah yeah, everyone wants to read the kinky hot sex. I look over my chapter listing and see which chapters have the most hits.... >.>
Delete*giggles*
I'm so glad I'm not the only one that thinks feet are weird. I need to have my husband... um... just read the comments about the feet.
Ugh i think blogger ate my comment?
ReplyDelete::cries:: there's no NewerPost button now :( write faster! :D
No, it ended up in spam, you spammer. jk LOL!
Delete/huff I'm freaking out about the next chapter! I'm worried it's going to be too weird. Would it be weird if I went supernatural in this? I mean, there's already a vampire band mentioned... and I've dropped major hints (and mentioned in comments) about Lynne.
I just don't know.
Comment spammer, that's me!
DeleteIt wouldn't be weird if it wasn't like, Disney supernatural, turning people into toads and such. Maybe a bad example, but I guess I mean it *can* be realistic. I'm guessing you mean a witch or a vampire? Witches are more believable to me, including in the modern sense. In fact, it's a rather fascinating topic to me. One of my *favoritestestest* stories was the Mayfair Witch series by Anne Rice.
So I'm wondering what the two of them will *do* to him. They obviously mean to lure him into something unpleasant. I wouldn't object if he got hit by a bus...although that might actually make things worse for Erin, because then she would grieve, which would tear Bryce up even more. So yeah, no buses please.
I guess I said that wrong. It *would* be weird if it was Disney witches turning people into toads.
DeleteWitches. At least for now. I guess... it's sims for crying out loud.
DeleteI'll just put a 'this is a strange chapter' warning at the beginning. Then I'll get back to my usual stuff. Working on it right now so long as puter doesnt crash... again. Hopefully by Monday if I can get the effects right. :-)
I'm afraid I'm having to turn off the comments to this one chapter. Should I go to the 'prove you're not a robot' thing, then I'll turn them back on, but it's very attractive to spammers.
ReplyDeletePlease, feel free to comment about this one on the next one or the one before!