Warning: Sensitive situations ... or just a little different
(and please forgive my pathetic photo editing skills)
Belinda
I ask Sean if we could sit down for a minute, so he asks me if he could buy me a drink. I say yes since I have a feeling we're both going to need it.
I nod my head at the poster behind the bar and ask, "You know who that is?"
"Um... no. Some singer, obviously," he says.
"She's my great-grandmother." I smile widely at him. "She was a jazz singer and got pretty famous in the 30s."
"Oh," he says and smiles sheepishly at me. "Sorry, jazz really isn't my 'thing.'"
"Mine neither mostly, although sometimes it's like you can't help but move to some songs, you know what I mean?" I tell him while he looks from the picture to me and back several times.
He smiles again and says, "I do know what you mean, actually. Especially with that song called In the Mood." A playful grin covers his features, and I debate convincing him to leave before Lynne gets here. "So, can you sing too?" he asks as the bartender hands us our drinks.
I shrug. "Yes, but I don't take it seriously." I remember the stories my grandmother would tell me about her mother and what fame like that did to her... according to my grandmother's father, that is.
I'm brought out of my reverie when Lynne walks up behind me, kisses me on the cheek, and says, "Hey, Lindy." Then she turns to Sean and says, "So, this must be the one you were talking about."
Sean stands politely, turns to look at her, and then stares at her chest for a few seconds longer than necessary.
Lynne whispers really loud to me, "You're right, he is cute." I roll my eyes and smile before I see Sean smiling too. Lynne leans up against Sean, wraps her arm around his shoulders and starts running her nails across his buzz cut. "Hi, I'm Lynne," she says in a seductive voice.
Oh boy. Sean, you are in serious trouble, I think and try real hard to remember that this is the same guy that tried to hurt Erin and did hurt Julian. It's not easy. He just looks so cute and innocent... like a little lost puppy.
I realize I've missed part of their conversation when I notice Sean acts like he wants to leave.
"Well, let's go," Lynne says and winks at me.
Of course, Sean is eager for Lynne and me to take him to her house.
Lynne is normally a very nice, selfless person... except when she feels wronged or someone has wronged those she cares about. It's during these moments that it's like she becomes a different person, similar to Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. It also doesn't help that she has extraordinary abilities to turn her Mr. Hyde into an unholy terror.
Lynne is on him like a duck on a June bug the second we walk into her house.
She suddenly kisses him. Holy shit, Lynne! He then breaks the kiss, turns to me and asks Lynne, "But what about your friend?"
Lynne looks at me and winks. "She can have her turn later."
I decide to play along, so I walk up to him, run my fingernail down his arm and say, "Besides, I like to watch." Lynne grins widely at me.
"You ladies do this sort of thing all the time?" Sean asks a little breathlessly while Lynne runs her hands over him under his shirt.
I let Lynne answer.
"Not too often. Only when we think we've found someone worthy of this sort of attention," she purrs. Then she 'suggests' that I go and make a few drinks. I shrug and do as I'm told.
When I come back, Lynne has removed his shirt and somehow convinced him to sit down in one of her chairs. She sits on his lap with her pants off, straddling him while he acts like he's eager to get her shirt off of her as well.
"I assume you don't need the drinks right now then," I state, trying to act like I'm upset they started without me.
Lynne looks up, laughs and says, "We can save them for later, hun." Sean pulls her shirt over her head and attacks her chest with his mouth while his hands run freely over her thighs. I go and plop the tray of drinks on the table. Lynne mouths the word 'cuffs' to me and I roll my eyes and go find them. She is so kinky. I'm assuming they're in the 'kinky-shit' drawer.
I walk over and discretely place the cuffs on the floor before I run my hands over his shoulders, chest and arms. He groans when I catch his hands and bring them up to me. Then he tilts his head back, and I kiss him, pulling his hands down behind the chair before I release his mouth. In my mind, the kiss is like an apology for future events.
He jumps in shock when he feels the cold metal wrap around his wrists. "What the?!"
Lynne puts one finger over his lips and says, "Shh! I thought you wanted to play."
"Not like this," he says nervously. "What good is it if I can't use my hands?"
I giggle and say, "Well, that's part of the torture."
Lynne winks at me before leaning down to kiss him again, running her hand down between his legs. He groans like she's driving him insane. Then I notice the switch in Lynne's personality.
"See?" she asks. "You like to play." He looks at her, wide-eyed, before she points at him and says, "Freeze." He freezes solid. It has begun.
"I like to play too, Sean," she says while she stands and takes a few steps away from him in her lingerie, looking deadly. He looks like he wants to faint while she walks back to him and runs her fingers down the side of his face.
"I can't move," Sean says in a panic.
"I know you can't. That's because I told you to freeze," Lynne responds after she takes a step back to put her finger to her lips in a contemplative gesture.
"But no, I really can't move!" he says with terror starting to creep into his voice.
Lynne smiles a little and asks, "Isn't this fun? I like to have fun." She walks around him and wraps her arms around his shoulders. "I know you like to have fun too."
"Not when I can't move," he says as calmly as he can manage.
"Would it be more fun if Erin were here, Sean?" Lynne asks him with a wicked gleam in her eyes.
Sean stops breathing, and I worry for a moment that he's going to pass out.
"Oh yes, I know Erin." She stands more upright and walks around him, watching his every expression. "Her boyfriend is one of my best friends, so that's how I know you like to have this brand of fun. Just what were you planning on doing the other night, Sean?"
He doesn't answer her for a few more seconds, so she slaps him across the face. "Breathe, you chicken shit! No passing out on me!"
"I..." he stammers, "I don't know what you mean."
A jolt comes out of her fingertip right into his chest, and his body jumps a little from the shock of it. "Wrong answer," she says calmly. "You know exactly what I mean," she snaps. "The other night... when you were trying to drag her into her house. When Julian stopped you."
"So that's the fucker's name," he says, and Lynne stands back up before she slaps him the other way this time. His lip starts bleeding a little. I can't help but feel grateful she has no close neighbors.
"Answer the question," she growls. "What were you going to do, Sean?"
"Fuck you," he says.
I see in the glass of the door as she laughs up to the ceiling. "Oh yes, I'm sure fucking had something to do with it." She pauses for a second and says, "You wanted to play. Very similar to the way I'm playing with you now, am I right?" He says nothing, so she asks, "It's not quite as fun on the other side of it, is it, Sean?" Then she sends another jolt of electricity into him.
I turn around and look as a hardened look as it comes over his face, and I know it's going to take more than what Lynne is doing to make him crack. I decide to step in, 'good cop' style.
Lynne looks on approvingly as I croon to him, "Poor baby." I start working his shoulders and back. "Did I forget to mention how my friend doesn't like people that mess with those we care about?" He shakes for just one moment before he goes rigid again. "We only want an answer to a very simple question." I straighten up to whisper behind his ear, "You were going to rape her, weren't you?"
"You bitches don't understand anything," he snaps, obviously trying to control himself.
Lynne walks over to him and runs a fingernail down his collarbone before saying, "That's why I asked you the question." She leans over him, bent in half with her legs straight to get right in his face. Her hand strokes his face as she asks, "What were you going to do to our sweet Erin?"
"I wasn't going to rape her!" he growls.
"That's not what Julian saw," I state.
"I did nothing wrong," he reiterates. "I don't know why she started yelling the way she did."
"Oh, you don't?" Lynne asks. "Give me some guesses then."
"You stupid witch, 'I don't know' means I don't know!" he snarls, and Lynne grabs him between his legs and twists. He screams.
She hisses at him, "You mean to tell me that you didn't know why she started yelling for help, this woman that you were engaged to?" She glares at him. "And you call me stupid?!"
A few tears escape his eyes, and he says in a pained voice, "I wasn't going to rape her. She was overreacting."
"Then answer the fucking question. If you weren't going to rape her, then what were you going to do?" Lynne asks in an icy voice.
"Fine! Talk! I just wanted her to talk to me!" he yells.
Lynne sniffs the air and says, "Lie." Another jolt shoots out of her finger into his kneecap, almost casually. "She didn't want to talk to you, did she? Whatever you were doing, it scared her enough to make her start yelling. It was at that point that you should have stopped, but you didn't, did you? No, you were trying to pull her into her house. Now, answer me truthfully, you were going to rape her once inside the house, weren't you?"
"No," he stubbornly maintains his story while Lynne paces the room.
She slowly walks back over to Sean and stands in front of him to ask, "Well, if all you were going to do is 'talk,' then what were you going to 'talk' about?"
Sean takes a deep breath and says, "None of your goddamn business."
She shoots yet another bolt from her fingertip, this time right at his dick. His eyes nearly pop out of his head, but he sets his jaw and doesn't make a sound. I try to refrain from telling Lynne that I think she's overdoing it. She looks pissed.
"Well, you see, Sean. That's where you're wrong. I'm making it my business," Lynne says as she calmly sits in his lap like a kid would Santa Claus. "You don't try to hurt my friends and think you can get away with it. Now, are you going to admit to the truth or am I going to have to make it to where you can never have children? I think I'd be doing the next generation a favor as well as any other woman you mistakenly think wants it when she doesn't."
He shrugs with mock nonchalance and says, "Fine. I wanted her to come back to me. I didn't know about the rebound guy."
Lynne glares at him and slowly walks around him. "You're not telling me everything, and you need to admit this to yourself as well. I really didn't want to have to crawl into your head, Sean, but it appears that I'm going to have to." She places a hand on either side of his head and closes her eyes. Sean appears to make an attempt to struggle.
"That's not true!" he yells suddenly, but Lynne keeps her hands on his head, a look of determination on her face. His eyes find me, and he asks, "What is she doing? I don't want to see this shit!"
"She's making you see the truth, and I'm guessing it's pretty ugly," I answer sadly. I really don't need to feel sympathetic.
His eyes look pleadingly at me as he yells, "No! It wasn't going to come to that! She loves me! She would come around!"
I take a deep breath. "Only it didn't look like she would come around, did it, Sean?" I ask, and I feel a little uncomfortable. "You were going to rape her if she didn't, weren't you?"
"I wouldn't have to," he whispers. Lynne zaps him right into his head, and he twitches. Finally, tears start coursing down his face as he whispers out a quiet, "Yes."
"I told you you can't lie to me you sick piece of shit!" Lynne spits out as she circles around him like a tiger stalking its prey.
Then she unleashes her full fury on him, and I have to take a step back to avoid the electrical storm. I'm terrified. I hate it when she gets like this, justified or not. I don't want to know what it was she really saw inside his head.
Sean starts screaming, and the rest of the lights in the house dim as if she's drawing power from the house's electricity. I cover my eyes like a child would.
When he finally is quiet again, I look to see that she's burned a word onto his chest: Rapist. Sean is passed out and slumped over in the chair. I can see he's breathing at least.
She slowly walks up to him and speaks quietly into his ear, "Can you hear me, Sean?" He grunts. "Good. Listen closely then. You're not going to remember any of this except for what I tell you right now, understand?" He mumbles out a yes. "Good. Now, I've placed a 'sign' on your chest that I'm wiping away now." She waves her hand over his chest, and the marking disappears. "However, it will appear to any woman that you ever hope to sleep with so that they know exactly what they're dealing with. Understand?"
"Yes," he sobs.
"Good. You decide you don't want Erin anymore, and you're better off without her. You have an overwhelming desire to return to your sad, little life and leave the island," she states, and Sean passes out after mumbling another yes.
I numbly reach for his shirt, happy that she didn't drag that out any longer, and find a hotel key in the pocket. "Room 224," I tell Lynne before she makes him stand, zombie-like, and removes his cuffs. Then she has him put his shirt back on before she leads him out of the house to her car and, I presume, his hotel. After I see a very satisfied expression on Lynne's face, I walk over to her couch and collapse against it, falling asleep immediately.
You won't remember the specifics of tonight either, Lindy, I hear like it's whispered right into my ear.
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I hope this wasn't too weird for the storyline. I don't want to stray too far into the supernatural world, but just graze it.
Lynne thought that that was a bit too far for Belinda, however, and she gave her that gift of forgetting. When Lynne had looked into Sean's mind, she saw what he'd intended to do since Erin wasn't 'cooperating' with him, and she was furious her guess was correct. Sean wouldn't admit it to himself because he thought he'd have been able to convince Erin and not have to resort to that, but he was also very determined to get what he wanted even if it meant that he'd have to force her to see that she loved him.
I don't want to possibly destroy Lynne's character in y'all'z eyes. This is not her normal behavior, but it is her "Mr. Hyde" like Belinda thinks. She meant it when she'd threatened Erin about making her life a living hell that Saturday morning before Erin found Bryce on the beach. Most of the time she's a very sweet, selfless, easy-going person. I need to write a chapter showing that more-dominant side of her real soon I guess.
Oh, and I loved putting in the connection to Cutest Lil' Jazz Singer. I used Gloria as a base when I made Belinda. :D









I'm totally with Lynne on this. Sean maybe didn't want to admit to himself that he would have raped Erin, but he would have. So, yeah, hurt the fucker forever.
ReplyDeleteNo forgiveness from you then! That's fine. :)
DeleteYeah, that was probably the only way he would admit it, even to himself.
Posting the next update tomorrow!
I think the girls went too far branding him for life. He is a shit and he deserved punishment but not to the extreme. If the rape had gone ahead then yes then what they did would have been justified.
ReplyDeleteHowever it was nice to see Sean pay even if it was overboard.
You make an excellent point. She marked him for something he only decided to do and didn't actually get around to doing. Lynne was pissed. Well, it's happened.
DeleteStill, yes he had something coming to him.
Next update tomorrow!
The disappearing rapist mark was a good touch, I thought. It kinda reminded of Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, how she tattoos her rapist like that.
ReplyDeleteWhen he gets into sexual situations in the future and a woman sees that, he's either going to prove that he is, or else have to work very hard to prove that he isn't. And who knows but that might be a good thing for him to find the one woman that understands, now that he's learned his lesson. I'm just glad that woman won't be Erin.
Ok, now time for more Bryce and Erin :)
Oh you know what I thought of last night (don't know why I was thinking about this) but about how Desmond is always so tense and angry. Can you *imagine* what make-up sex would be like with him?! And the way they argue and fight, and stubborn as Ginger is, I'll bet there's gonna be a good bit of that.
Huh, I've never heard of that. Neat.
DeleteOooo another very good point made. I'd just pictured him in my head never getting laid again unless he could somehow do it in the pitch darkness (hm, no, it glows a little, .. anyway...) or blindfold her or something. It's possible he Could find someone like you said.
Yeah, it just doesn't need to be Erin. She and Bryce need each other.
>:)
I really really need to get a Desmond/Ginger bit out. I'm trying to figure out how to segue into it. Hehe, glad you've got a grasp on his character because it's probably very similar to what you're imagining. And the side he brings out in Ginger... *giggles maniacally*
My mind is awash with different scenarios for them. His office is my favorite thus far. Hmmm...
Anyway, more Bryce and Erin tomorrow. I really kind of hate this update I just released, so I need a nicer one quick on its heels. :)
I know you said you weren't sure how to approach this chapter, but you did very well :) YAY for more Bryce and Erin!
DeleteAs to Desmond, he did tell her he'd imagined taking her on his desk...all he needs to do is request a book, maybe the day after they've had another fight :D
Quit reading my mind!!! :P
DeleteOk, on my phone writing this, its easier than the tablet because I text 24/7 so can use the keyboard. Thought id warn you that my phone doesn't know proper grammar and capitalization like we do, but its too much effort to go back and change bits. I may not proof this either, so sorry for any continuity errors, you get to see how I think :)
ReplyDeleteOk, yes, Lynne went a little bit ott, but I loved it!! Not too weird or anything, promise. I'm so happy that she got Sean to admit what he was going to do. We all knew that was what he'd planned, and I think admitting it to himself may help Sean. Of course, being hypnotized to forget about running after her will do that too... Lol
I'm glad Lynne let Belinda forget about it all too. I imagine its not the first time Lynne has had to wipe her best friends memory. I hope if I ever meet Lynne (which could totally happen!) and meet her Hyde side then shell wipe my memory too! Hehe
I agree with (ikr who said it now) about the disappearing'rapist' helping Sean. It will make him think about who he sleeps with, and hopefully (as much as I hate him) hell find that one special (crazy) girl who can look past it. Hell have to get to know her before trying to bed her, and hell have to explain his past, which can only be a good thing.
Also, Lynne is kinky? Dies troy know? When will he find out? He looks too sweet and innocent to get involved with crazy Lynne! Lol
I need you to get the next chapter out sharpish, please! Its been like, 10 hours since my laptop gave up, and im already dying of withdrawls. Its worse because I got all the shots for my next legacy chapter but didn't upload them to photobucket yet! Facepalm.
Anyway, I thought of something else to say. You've not turned me off Lynne at all. If anything I love her more, and cannot wait for Ashley to dare to rear her ugly head, as she undoubtedly will. Oh, the things *I* want to do to her, let alone Lynne! She's worse than Sean because she abandoned her child as well. She makes me sick, and I need to put a face to her, even though I don't want her storming in and ruining Bryce.
Think that's it. For now.
Oooohhhhh!!! Love you Lynne!! :D
At least you loved OTT Lynne. I'm not a big fan, but it's one of those 'story takes on a life of its own' moments. The big thing here is she finally got Sean to admit to what he was planning. Lynne is a 'let the punishment fit the crime' kind of gal.... even if she went a little too far this time. Emotional.
DeleteBelinda is a little more fragile than Lynne. Not saying she IS fragile, it's just it gets to be more than she can handle. One of the things I DO like about this chapter is that it's told from Belinda's p.o.v., and we get to see how she thought Lynne was pushing it too far.
Hopefully, if you meet a Lynne, then you won't have done something that you needed to be punished for. <.<
Yeah, that's a good point, one I didn't think of until Misty said it. LOL at the (crazy)!
OMG the kinky bit. I don't know quite yet how far I want to take that. I was planning that for a different couple tho. ^^ I had to come up with a reason for the cuffs... which really weren't a necessity since Lynne could tell him to Freeze any way she wanted. That's just how I made the pose and as I was putting in the details I'm like 'f--- it!' /facepalm
Troy is the sweetest, not-not-quite-as-innocent-as-he-appears, compassionate person on that island.
Next chapter out TOMORROW! I have to have a happy/warmandfuzzy chapter or I'm going to go brain-scrambled (jazen below is very near my own reaction -- someone used my body, I didn't write this... yeah.)
O.O your laptop died?!?!?!?!?! I must've missed something in the details (typical me).
Oh oh oh oh oh Ashley. There's a reason Lynne can't go after Ashley. :X
:D
Ok so yeah not sure how to react to this chapter. So Lynne is a witch, interesting and an angle I never saw coming. I am all for him needing to pay because he's scum but the branding for life is a bit much. It is like the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo but he actually raped her and her payback was to tattoo rapist across his chest.
ReplyDeleteSo in Sean's case not sure how I feel about him being branded for life like that (yes I know conflicted here. How did you manage that???) I just think there could have been some other punishment there but yeah sorta speechless on that one. (You really did a number on my thinking with this damn it. How dare you make me sorta maybe a little feel bad for Sean)
Well glad she wiped Belinda's memory because I think seeing Lynne do that would have really messed with her head and maybe altered the friendship a bit. I'm guessing this wasn't the first time Lynne has gone Hyde but this must have been the worst she's seen of it.
So if she was out to protect Bryce from Erin before what did she do (if anything) to his ex? I mean she left him and Adele so I can't imagine that Lynne just let her get away. Maybe that's why we haven't heard anything from her. She's not around to speak anymore. (scary thought)
Damn it Mypal I'm so confused now. What the hell did you do to my thinking??? My mind is fried right now. Thanks for that :P
You and me both. Invasion of the body snatchers is a good way to put it. :P
DeleteYeah, I'd drop super-subtle-not-surprised-you-didn't-catch-them hints. One thing bothers me is that she didn't fix her own stove with magic. Oh well *letting it go*.
She overdid it and got caught up in the moment. She still likes the punishment though. What IS this dragon tattoo thing people are mentioning? I live under a rock. (actually the cave/basement)
I conflicted the creator of the evil Seth. Wow.
Maybe confused is a better word.
Sympathy for Sean well... blame Belinda. It's told in her perspective, and she was a sucker for those puppy-dog eyes.
Belinda's seen Lynne do a few hair-brained stunts, but nothing like this that she can remember. She just knows that the woman can get dangerous. So, Lynne wipes the specifics so Belinda doesn't have to think about them.
Arg!!! So... hard.... not... to..... say.... why Lynne didn't do anything to Ashley. It's not complicated, but I don't want to give it away.
Sorry sorry!!! Payback for all the nightmares you gave me? LOL j/k. Tomorrow will be better I hope.
http://www.sonypictures.com/homevideo/thegirlwiththedragontattoo/
DeleteLink to the movie info. It's a book series all involving the two main characters. Lisbeth is the chick that does the tattooing.
and yes you conflicted me. I am always conflicted with Seth but he's mine so its different I guess. Yes because it was Belinda I guess is why I may have felt sorry (ish) for him.
DeleteTY for the link. *peeps out from under rock* (so that's what the sun looks like)
DeleteSeth is very conflicting, so that's easy to understand. I can't do many chapters like this or my head will implode.
hahahaha...yeah I understand. The really brutal chapters take a lot out of me as well. It took me a long time to actually write the last one because of the content. I just can't stay in that place for an extended period of time.
DeleteIt's a great movie BTW if you ever decide to watch it.
Wow, a jolt to the south... Sean, you'd have been better off had you never set foot on this island. That SOB, he really did plan to Rape Erin, G******, M*****, F*****, Aargh... It's a good thing Lynn-the jolter was his sentence-er and not me... Ohoho, no more babies for him, I wouldn't have thought about it twice!!!
ReplyDeleteNice setup she came up with. I actually saw pictured him swallowing hard!! when she mentioned Erin. The bastard didn't even know what kind of threesome this was going to be. Haha, rapist, I love that idea... also scarred for life... Okay, maybe that was a bit harsh, bit still no, no mercy!
Nice link to Gloria there ;P
LOL! Yeah, he'd have done better sticking with Meredith, but he was stubbornly determined. He got a lot more than he bargained for.
DeleteLynne considered making it to where he couldn't have children.
'What harm can come from a little flirting?' I think is what I made him think to himself. Well, he found out! Just because they're women doesn't make them not dangerous!
Maybe she could've burned asshole on his chest instead. Oh well, it's done, and that's what she did.
I liked genetically-created Gloria, and I put her in the bin. When it came time to make Belinda, Gloria popped up. I laughed and just did some alterations. :)
Holy crap! :) In a good way. The little bit of supernatural was all right, it didn't ruin anything for me. It was funny actually cause I saw Oz yesterday, and the bad witch had lightning come out of her hand, so I kept thinking about that while reading this.
ReplyDeleteOK, to the story. I love characters who are not what they seem, so Lynne's 'Dr. Jekyll' side didn't turn me off at all. ;o)
I did kind of think tattooing Sean was a little mean, but if he is meant to be with someone, then she will understand what he's been through and not just judge him on appearances alone.
Wow, I'm pulling from stuff I've never seen. First that dragon thing and now Oz. That's cool that they made her do that. I was actually thinking of the emperor in Star Wars.
DeleteGlad you didn't think it was too weird. She's really not all evil, just powerful.
Yeah, Lynne was really pissed off and maybe carried it too far, but what's done is done.
:)
I love the connection to Gloria lol. Lynne can be very scary is all I can say but her little branding of Sean, a la the Scarlett Letter, was deserved.
ReplyDeleteHehe, yeah. I love connecting stories, and that's a way I could connect CLJS to something.
DeleteLynne can get a little carried away when she gets angry. Scarlet Letter, I never would've made that connection! Really obvious now though. :)
Wow, this was great...now to catch up on the rest of it
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you're catching up. :-)
Deletehahaha ... was great revenge
ReplyDelete>:) "Lynne can be ... a little intense sometimes." ~ Bryce
DeleteI liked the supernatural twist of this chapter! So finally Sean will leave I guess. His punishment was harsh, but now he will have to explain what he once was about to do to every girl he wants to be with before he takes it any further, so actually it's quite perfect :-)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad. I'm going to throw in a little more supernatural slowly over time.
DeleteIt was a tad harsh. Lynne got carried away in her anger (righteous anger, mostly, but still)
LOL @ 'so actually it's quite perfect :-)'
Can't feel bad for Sean at all. I'm just glad he's finally going to be leaving.
ReplyDeleteIt's a little sad that it took what amounts to compulsion to get him to do it though.
DeleteOooh, I like! I had no idea what she had in mind when said that Erin's was one of them now and they look out for their own (LOVED that bit) but he's deserved all of that. He's a whole 'nother kind of shit, and he got what he deserved. I really wasn't expecting there to be a supernatural element but I like it! I still adore Ginger of course, but I have a close 2nd favourite now ^^
ReplyDeleteIt bothers me that I waited this long to add in the supernatural element to the story. It was there in the beginning, but I couldn't implement it in any way without it looking wrong since Erin had no idea and Bryce doesn't think much about it.
Delete:)
COMMENT FOR CHAPTER 38: Oh goody! Looks like Sean has been spotted and has crosshairs on his back. About time! And I cannot wait to see what Lynne has in store for that jerk! Guess once I finish this I'll just scroll up to see. ;)
ReplyDeleteEeewwww... Feet. Which... has extra squick factor for me. I wasn't allowed to paint my toes growing up. Never. It would send my parents into fits of rage and wasn't worth sneaking out for everything for the next three months so I finally stopped (now they're never not painted. Though they're still gross and icky and no one should ever touch anyone else's feet. Ever!) then I found out why... ooof. It still makes me uncomfortable. Hahaicky.
I'd forgotten I had to do that with that chapter. I'll bet the spam problem isn't as bad anymore since I've noticed Google does a better job with that.
DeleteYup. He's been spotted by that dynamic duo.
Lol! I have a thing with feet too, and my husband likes to tease me about it. Not allowed to paint your toes?!?!?! We were encouraged. Guess we were just a bunch of loose women floosies. Lol. Feet are only bearable to see in sandals or flip-flops if the nails are painted. I agree.
Aaand now for 39: Well. At least Sean's had the horrifying experience he was trying to force through. Too bad Erin will never know that he was forced to admit and feel sorry for what he would have done. Well, maybe he was only sorry because Lynne made him 'feel 'everything, but still. Gotta be glad Belinda won't remember it either. That's quite a handy trick Lynne used at the end. He's still punished, but has no idea. Now if only he'll stay gone for good.
ReplyDeleteTrue. He's had the horrific experience. This chapter still gets on my nerves. I feel like the whole supernatural thing was thrown in with a willy-nilly feeling, which wasn't my intention. Quite a few characters are witches, but that will come to light eventually.
DeleteYeah. Erin will mostly never know.
Lynne decided it was a bit much for Lindy to have to remember since she went to her absolute worst with Sean.
Just have to wait and see if he's gone for good.