Jesse
It is really not my day. When I'd gone to pick up Ginger, she'd asked me where the rest of her costume was. She'd asked me not to get something too short! How was I to know she was going to complain about what the top looked like? I was just so happy she was helping out that I offered to get the thing for her as a thank you.
Not that it mattered after all... For a while there, I wondered if Bryce took care of finding someone for me for me. Why else have the new waitress dress up like that? And she's blonde. And her eyes are green. And her name is Marie. And she has great legs. Unfortunately, those great legs have knees... mean knees, surprisingly-powerful, well-aiming knees.
"Get up, Jesse," I hear Bryce order. I don't want to. I think I'll just lay here on the floor for a while, thanks. Like an idiot, I get up.
"Shit," I should've expected this. Of course, I deserve a good punch in the jaw. He went easy on me, even if I lose my balance anyway and fall on the floor. Then Lynne comes over and starts trying to clean my face up. Lynne has a great rack.
I seriously need to get laid.
I turn my head and watch Desmond stomp after Ginger after she disappears behind the building. Well, there goes my sort-of partner in crime. I look over at Marie now. At first, I think she looks like she doesn't know if she should laugh or be concerned, but wait no... that's not it, there's more to it than that. As soon as she sees me really looking at her, the look of pain I see in her eyes quickly leaves to be replaced by a calm mask. Interesting.
Bryce distracts me from further wondering what that look was by making me get up again and apologize to Erin. Geez, Bryce. Can't you see she's uncomfortable? I was gonna do this anyway, but on my own schedule, when I thought Erin could handle it. Now you're forcing her to. I don't know if I completely buy her acceptance of my apology, but I drop it. I need to sit down anyway.
Unfortunately, I don't get to yet. What the hell? I need to get laid, but not that bad.
Yet.
I decline the emasculating flowers as politely as I can. I really don't need this crazy woman and her probable loads of baggage. I glance out of the corner of my eye to see if Marie saw any of this. She didn't. She looks like she's getting hassled by an underage kid trying to pass himself off as eighteen.
Marie
Yeah, right. You're not any older than my little brother. I'll go get you some carbonated kool-aid.
The place has picked up all of a sudden. Too many people stand around without drinks in their hands. This is my first Friday night, and I'm not about to screw it up.
Only a few Fridays ago, I was out with Dawson... then that bitch Cristina showed up.... Don't think about him, about anybody. Just. Work.
I walk over to Jones. He winks at me like he understands completely when I ask him to fix me something that looks like an adult drink, but isn't, for the kid behind me.
"You know," he tells me as he makes the drink, "I know you're upset with Bryce about the whole outfit prank thing, but you look really good in that."
"Um," What? "thanks... I guess," I stammer back. He laughs a little and hands me the drink.
I walk around from person to person and get a load of drink orders. After I've handed some of them out, a brunette walks up to me.
"Hi. You must be the new waitress. I'm sorry," she says.
I decide to be friendly even though I can sense some animosity coming from her towards me. "Um, yes. I'm Marie. Can I get you anything?"
"Why the hell are you dressed like that?" she asks instead of answering my question. She glares at somebody walking behind me. After a few seconds, I see it's Bryce.
"Practical joke. It's some orientation thing I'm sure," I say laughingly even though I want to knock down my boss at the moment.
"That's funny," she says like it's not. "I didn't have to go through any such nonsense. It makes me wonder if he had you dress this way since he knew Jesse would be dressed like that. How does it feel to be set up?"
I want to hit her. Must... not... hit... customers. Somehow I doubt Bryce would tolerate that. "Oh, I didn't know you worked here. Are you the waitress that got fired?" I ask sweetly. Satisfaction courses through me with her split-second glare before she can mirror my plastered-on smile.
"Oh no. I quit. I'd had enough of watching my boss flirt with anything that moved."
"Funny. I've only seen him flirt with his girlfriend."
"Oh, well this was before," she waves her hand and looks around. "So, do you like being set up with Jesse?" she asks again just to get on my nerves.
"The way I see it, it's a coincidence. He came here with someone... though she left I think." Is she jealous of the fact that it looks like Bryce wants to set me up with Captain Brainless? I wonder if I should milk this jealousy just for the fun of it. So, I shrug and say, "But who knows, n'est-ce pas? Anything could happen. Maybe he thinks it's a good idea." I watch her expression cloud over with a feeling of increased satisfaction.
"Well, then maybe I should warn you. He flies through women faster than your new boss used to," she snips.
"Which means nothing to me since I have no idea what you mean." Do I detect a hint of jealousy about Bryce as well?
She sighs dramatically and says, "Well then, I suppose you'll just have to learn the hard way. Don't say I didn't warn you." She pauses for a second to see if I'll say anything. I don't, so she says, "Yes. Go get me a drink. A Big Mistake. I'll drink it in your honor." She grins.
"Augh, you don't need to pay me the compliment, and I'll get that for you right away," I say, my voice dripping with false sweetness as I swish my skirt and turn towards Jones. I listen intently behind me for any sudden movements in case she tries something. I hope she does. Self-defense can be so rewarding.
Where did I put those eyedrops?
Life is unfair, I think as I watch Troy and Lynne dancing for a moment once Adele has finished teasing me about my attire. She enjoys a good practical joke as much as her father I think. Only, my costume isn't a practical joke. Marie's is.
It didn't work, Bryce, she hates me already.
I guess I was a dick.
I probably should apologize. Second one for tonight... if she'll even let me talk to her long enough for me to get it out.
I turn around a little to see her prance away from Bernadette while Bernadette stares at her with her hand on her hip like she's mad. That woman's always mad. Both definitions. Then I turn away and rest my cheek on my hand.
I need to change up my game.
I sit here and think about how I might go about doing that. Everything I've done lately has earned me a picture thrown at me, a knee to the groin, and a punch in the jaw -- not my finest moments. I ponder that look I saw in Marie's eyes as I'd laid on the floor when I lost my balance after Bryce punched me. There was this look of fear and pain that she quickly hid when she saw me looking at her. I turn around to figure out where she is. She's standing over by the bar. I swear it looks like Jones is flirting with her.
You're not going to come and ask me if I want anything, Marie? I'm sitting here at a table...
Bernadette suddenly gets up and runs to the bathroom. I watch Marie as she looks at her with a smirk on her face. I turn back around to face the table when I see Bryce pull Erin out on the dance floor. Not too much later, I breathe a sigh of relief when they disappear off to the overflow seating. Still jealous of my best friend.
I decide to go ahead and try to talk to Marie again -- this time just being nice. I walk up behind her right when she makes some remark about how Bryce just vanished, and she sounds a little pissed off. That's about the time that Pamela tells her that she's his sister. The 'oh shit' look on Marie's face is priceless! I don't score many points when I can't help but crack up laughing behind her.
"What do you want, anyway?" she asks with a scowl as she turns around to me. Pamela looks at me as if to say 'what are you up to, Jesse?'
I keep my grin on my face as I answer Marie, "Well, I was sitting over there at a table, and you never came over to take my order, so I thought I'd get up and find you myself to ask for a beer." I instantly feel bad about complaining. It was supposed to be all in good fun, but she looks panicked that she thinks she screwed up again. "No, don't worry about it, Marie. It's fine. I don't blame you for not wanting to talk to me," I say quickly to keep her from getting further upset.
The worried look is still there as she says, "I'm sorry. That's no excuse. I still should've come over. What would you like?"
Not quite knowing what else to do at this moment, I tell her the brand, and she hurries along to get it.
I can't win for losing. Now I've made her feel worse.
I look at Pam and say, "Don't be mad at her for her trash-talking Bryce. She's not had the best night."
"Oh, I'm okay with that. I just wanted her to know before she really said something stupid that she didn't need to say to a customer anyway." She walks off to go talk to Simon or something.
Marie comes back with my bottle in her hand. She hands it to me real fast. Too fast. I don't have a chance to try and catch her hand with my fingers like I like to do. She still looks panicked. "Hey, Marie. Hold up a sec, would you?" I ask.
"I can't. I have to apologize right now to that other woman," she says quickly and darts away. I resolutely watch her as I go ahead and drink the beer I didn't even really want in the first place.
I have no idea where Bryce went. The last I saw of him, he was walking off with his girlfriend. But I looked where they went, and I didn't see him. The place is getting crowded, and I can't do it on my own since Jones has to stay behind the bar!
Then, oh great, I mouth off to his sister of all people. What was I thinking?! Then, Captain Insano has to remind me what a terrible job I'm doing at my job.
After I, finally, get everyone's order taken care of and make sure they're all happy -- they're mostly easy-going people I've noticed -- I go and plop myself down at a bar stool. I work at not crying. I'm exhausted. I'm angry. I'm homesick. At first, Jones tries to cheer me up, but he gets distracted by a patron running his mouth like we really care what he has to say.
"Everything okay?" I hear from behind me. Oh crap. Jesse again.
"I'm fine," I say, tight-lipped.
"You don't look it."
Go away! I let out a huff. "Do you need me to get anything for you?" I ask automatically. I forget I'm sitting right at the bar, and if he wanted anything, he could order it his damn self.
He smiles like the same thought just occurred to him as well. I fight the urge to just faceplant right into the bar's counter.
"Just a moment of your time, if you don't mind," he says.
I get irritated at my shaking hands, so I clench them together tightly on the counter in front of me. "Well, that all depends on what it is that you have to say."
"You shouldn't hold your head that way. You'll get a crick in your neck," he says and reaches up to massage the back of my neck with one hand.
Oh damn, that feels good. "Is that all? I can't believe you came over here to just comment on my posture," I lightly snap, working hard at not showing how what he's doing is affecting me.
He laughs softly and says, "No. I came over here to apologize for earlier, and... earlier." I irritatedly throw my arm back to get his hand off the back of my neck. He drops his hand and says, "And... sorry for that too, I guess. It's just you look incredibly tense, and it was bothering me."
"I'm fine. I'm only waiting for this crazy evening to end," I say, not sure what to do with the apology.
"Yeah, and I contributed to the craziness. Ginger's right in a way. Sometimes I just don't think."
I work hard at not snorting. No shit. I decide to just be nice. "I accept your apology," I say before I watch a wide grin cover his face. I also see an un-amused expression flit across Jones' face when he looks at Jesse for a second. So, he doesn't think much of the boss's best friend either.
"Thank you, Marie," he says with that same boyish grin. He then leans down on the counter on his elbows and puts his chin on his hand. He looks ridiculous, but in a cute way like he's giving me his full attention. He asks, "So, where are you from?"
Great, I think sarcastically. I can see no way to avoid the question without being completely rude, so I say, "Champs les Sims."
He blinks a few times and says, "Wow. That far away, huh? Why did you decide to move here?"
It's a simple enough question, but I don't feel like getting into the answer right now. "Look, Jesse. I'm really sorry, but I don't have time to sit here now. We're getting ready to close up, and I need to straighten a few things before I can go home."
"Would it help you if I helped?" he asks as I get off the bar stool.
I let out another huff and say with a shrug, "Knock yourself out." I like that phrase.
He does a decent job of helping me get things cleaned up while Jones closes out the register. As we work, he tells me all about himself. I don't really care if he runs a store or if his family used to come here every summer, but he tells me anyway. I'm too tired to tell him to just be quiet.
I sit here and wait for Jones to finish up so I can go home when I hear Jesse's boots sounding overly-loud as they cross the floor towards me.
"May I walk you home?" he asks me while I stare at his shoes.
"You know," he tells me as he makes the drink, "I know you're upset with Bryce about the whole outfit prank thing, but you look really good in that."
"Um," What? "thanks... I guess," I stammer back. He laughs a little and hands me the drink.
I walk around from person to person and get a load of drink orders. After I've handed some of them out, a brunette walks up to me.
"Hi. You must be the new waitress. I'm sorry," she says.
I decide to be friendly even though I can sense some animosity coming from her towards me. "Um, yes. I'm Marie. Can I get you anything?"
"Why the hell are you dressed like that?" she asks instead of answering my question. She glares at somebody walking behind me. After a few seconds, I see it's Bryce.
"Practical joke. It's some orientation thing I'm sure," I say laughingly even though I want to knock down my boss at the moment.
"That's funny," she says like it's not. "I didn't have to go through any such nonsense. It makes me wonder if he had you dress this way since he knew Jesse would be dressed like that. How does it feel to be set up?"
I want to hit her. Must... not... hit... customers. Somehow I doubt Bryce would tolerate that. "Oh, I didn't know you worked here. Are you the waitress that got fired?" I ask sweetly. Satisfaction courses through me with her split-second glare before she can mirror my plastered-on smile.
"Oh no. I quit. I'd had enough of watching my boss flirt with anything that moved."
"Funny. I've only seen him flirt with his girlfriend."
"Oh, well this was before," she waves her hand and looks around. "So, do you like being set up with Jesse?" she asks again just to get on my nerves.
"The way I see it, it's a coincidence. He came here with someone... though she left I think." Is she jealous of the fact that it looks like Bryce wants to set me up with Captain Brainless? I wonder if I should milk this jealousy just for the fun of it. So, I shrug and say, "But who knows, n'est-ce pas? Anything could happen. Maybe he thinks it's a good idea." I watch her expression cloud over with a feeling of increased satisfaction.
"Well, then maybe I should warn you. He flies through women faster than your new boss used to," she snips.
"Which means nothing to me since I have no idea what you mean." Do I detect a hint of jealousy about Bryce as well?
She sighs dramatically and says, "Well then, I suppose you'll just have to learn the hard way. Don't say I didn't warn you." She pauses for a second to see if I'll say anything. I don't, so she says, "Yes. Go get me a drink. A Big Mistake. I'll drink it in your honor." She grins.
"Augh, you don't need to pay me the compliment, and I'll get that for you right away," I say, my voice dripping with false sweetness as I swish my skirt and turn towards Jones. I listen intently behind me for any sudden movements in case she tries something. I hope she does. Self-defense can be so rewarding.
Where did I put those eyedrops?
Jesse
Life is unfair, I think as I watch Troy and Lynne dancing for a moment once Adele has finished teasing me about my attire. She enjoys a good practical joke as much as her father I think. Only, my costume isn't a practical joke. Marie's is.
It didn't work, Bryce, she hates me already.
I guess I was a dick.
I probably should apologize. Second one for tonight... if she'll even let me talk to her long enough for me to get it out.
I turn around a little to see her prance away from Bernadette while Bernadette stares at her with her hand on her hip like she's mad. That woman's always mad. Both definitions. Then I turn away and rest my cheek on my hand.
I need to change up my game.
I sit here and think about how I might go about doing that. Everything I've done lately has earned me a picture thrown at me, a knee to the groin, and a punch in the jaw -- not my finest moments. I ponder that look I saw in Marie's eyes as I'd laid on the floor when I lost my balance after Bryce punched me. There was this look of fear and pain that she quickly hid when she saw me looking at her. I turn around to figure out where she is. She's standing over by the bar. I swear it looks like Jones is flirting with her.
You're not going to come and ask me if I want anything, Marie? I'm sitting here at a table...
Bernadette suddenly gets up and runs to the bathroom. I watch Marie as she looks at her with a smirk on her face. I turn back around to face the table when I see Bryce pull Erin out on the dance floor. Not too much later, I breathe a sigh of relief when they disappear off to the overflow seating. Still jealous of my best friend.
I decide to go ahead and try to talk to Marie again -- this time just being nice. I walk up behind her right when she makes some remark about how Bryce just vanished, and she sounds a little pissed off. That's about the time that Pamela tells her that she's his sister. The 'oh shit' look on Marie's face is priceless! I don't score many points when I can't help but crack up laughing behind her.
"What do you want, anyway?" she asks with a scowl as she turns around to me. Pamela looks at me as if to say 'what are you up to, Jesse?'
I keep my grin on my face as I answer Marie, "Well, I was sitting over there at a table, and you never came over to take my order, so I thought I'd get up and find you myself to ask for a beer." I instantly feel bad about complaining. It was supposed to be all in good fun, but she looks panicked that she thinks she screwed up again. "No, don't worry about it, Marie. It's fine. I don't blame you for not wanting to talk to me," I say quickly to keep her from getting further upset.
The worried look is still there as she says, "I'm sorry. That's no excuse. I still should've come over. What would you like?"
Not quite knowing what else to do at this moment, I tell her the brand, and she hurries along to get it.
I can't win for losing. Now I've made her feel worse.
I look at Pam and say, "Don't be mad at her for her trash-talking Bryce. She's not had the best night."
"Oh, I'm okay with that. I just wanted her to know before she really said something stupid that she didn't need to say to a customer anyway." She walks off to go talk to Simon or something.
Marie comes back with my bottle in her hand. She hands it to me real fast. Too fast. I don't have a chance to try and catch her hand with my fingers like I like to do. She still looks panicked. "Hey, Marie. Hold up a sec, would you?" I ask.
"I can't. I have to apologize right now to that other woman," she says quickly and darts away. I resolutely watch her as I go ahead and drink the beer I didn't even really want in the first place.
Marie
I have no idea where Bryce went. The last I saw of him, he was walking off with his girlfriend. But I looked where they went, and I didn't see him. The place is getting crowded, and I can't do it on my own since Jones has to stay behind the bar!
Then, oh great, I mouth off to his sister of all people. What was I thinking?! Then, Captain Insano has to remind me what a terrible job I'm doing at my job.
After I, finally, get everyone's order taken care of and make sure they're all happy -- they're mostly easy-going people I've noticed -- I go and plop myself down at a bar stool. I work at not crying. I'm exhausted. I'm angry. I'm homesick. At first, Jones tries to cheer me up, but he gets distracted by a patron running his mouth like we really care what he has to say.
"Everything okay?" I hear from behind me. Oh crap. Jesse again.
"I'm fine," I say, tight-lipped.
"You don't look it."
Go away! I let out a huff. "Do you need me to get anything for you?" I ask automatically. I forget I'm sitting right at the bar, and if he wanted anything, he could order it his damn self.
He smiles like the same thought just occurred to him as well. I fight the urge to just faceplant right into the bar's counter.
"Just a moment of your time, if you don't mind," he says.
I get irritated at my shaking hands, so I clench them together tightly on the counter in front of me. "Well, that all depends on what it is that you have to say."
"You shouldn't hold your head that way. You'll get a crick in your neck," he says and reaches up to massage the back of my neck with one hand.
Oh damn, that feels good. "Is that all? I can't believe you came over here to just comment on my posture," I lightly snap, working hard at not showing how what he's doing is affecting me.
He laughs softly and says, "No. I came over here to apologize for earlier, and... earlier." I irritatedly throw my arm back to get his hand off the back of my neck. He drops his hand and says, "And... sorry for that too, I guess. It's just you look incredibly tense, and it was bothering me."
"I'm fine. I'm only waiting for this crazy evening to end," I say, not sure what to do with the apology.
"Yeah, and I contributed to the craziness. Ginger's right in a way. Sometimes I just don't think."
I work hard at not snorting. No shit. I decide to just be nice. "I accept your apology," I say before I watch a wide grin cover his face. I also see an un-amused expression flit across Jones' face when he looks at Jesse for a second. So, he doesn't think much of the boss's best friend either.
"Thank you, Marie," he says with that same boyish grin. He then leans down on the counter on his elbows and puts his chin on his hand. He looks ridiculous, but in a cute way like he's giving me his full attention. He asks, "So, where are you from?"
Great, I think sarcastically. I can see no way to avoid the question without being completely rude, so I say, "Champs les Sims."
He blinks a few times and says, "Wow. That far away, huh? Why did you decide to move here?"
It's a simple enough question, but I don't feel like getting into the answer right now. "Look, Jesse. I'm really sorry, but I don't have time to sit here now. We're getting ready to close up, and I need to straighten a few things before I can go home."
"Would it help you if I helped?" he asks as I get off the bar stool.
I let out another huff and say with a shrug, "Knock yourself out." I like that phrase.
He does a decent job of helping me get things cleaned up while Jones closes out the register. As we work, he tells me all about himself. I don't really care if he runs a store or if his family used to come here every summer, but he tells me anyway. I'm too tired to tell him to just be quiet.
I sit here and wait for Jones to finish up so I can go home when I hear Jesse's boots sounding overly-loud as they cross the floor towards me.
"May I walk you home?" he asks me while I stare at his shoes.













hahaha wow poor Jesse. He's trying but it's hard to make a come back from that first impression he made. Jones doesn't like how Jesse is around. He must know of his reputation. Hopefully it will be different this time if Marie gives him a chance. Will we learn more about Dawson and Cristina or is that something from the other story since she is a cross over?
ReplyDeleteAnyway interesting to see where this goes.
Poor Jesse can't catch a break, can he? He's going to have an uphill battle if he wants to show Marie that he's a decent guy underneath all the overly-flirtatious behavior.
DeleteJones has known Jesse for a little while now, and no, he doesn't trust him. he doesn't like that Jesse looks to have an attraction for Marie.
Dawson and Cristina are both from Queen of Denial. Dawson was Marie's best-friend-turned-boyfriend, and Cristina was his girlfriend when he and Marie were only friends. It's better explained in the 'Meet Marie' bonus chapter, but that's the skinny. Cristina moved away then Marie and Dawson dated. Then, Cristina came back and wanted Dawson back. Marie caught the two of them making out at the ruins.
Only time will tell if Marie gives Jesse his chance. :)
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I didn't think Jesse could come back from the mess he made earlier with Marie, but that closing sequence's made think maybe Marie's not so immune to him.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if she'll say yes, to the walk. And if she does, will she allow him to kiss her goodnight under the stars? I hope, hope, hope she does. I can't help it, I'm such a romantic.
Jesse didn't approach the Marie situation right from the start, but he's trying to turn things around, and they are both trying to get over somebody, so maybe this can work, just for a little while, or just until they've eased the ache in their hearts.
:) Jesse's a hopeless romantic at heart (even if I didn't actually give him the trait itself), and he usually manages to find a way to bounce back to make things work.
DeleteMarie's not as immune as she'd like to be. After everything that's happened, she just wants to be left alone. It doesn't look like that's going to happen. She's attracted to Jesse even if his behavior is less than exemplary.
She could say yes to the walk. I'm sure Jesse would love that, obviously. He'd love to have that little one-on-one time with her as they walk to her apartment. I bet he also hopes that she lets him kiss her goodnight. ;)
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ARGH!! Damn you :p I wanted this to be Saturday!!
ReplyDeleteThat said, this was a brilliant insight into what may come for Jesse and Marie.
Jesse really is such a lovable idiot! He makes me laugh and then immediately feel sorry for him. Bless him, he's trying.
Marie should say yes to the walk home, she clearly secretly likes him, and if Jesse really does want to change, he needs to start with seeing someone who won't be gone at the end of the week.
But there are no more sides to Friday nights story are there? That means Saturday is the next one...? :D
*blinks eyes innocently* But but but... I had more of Friday night to tell. Still do, in fact. :P LOL, but the next update will get into Saturday eventually....
DeleteI love Jesse. I really make him do some crazy stuff, but he's good-natured about all of it. Yes, he keeps trying, ever the optimist. He'd be good for Marie if she gives him a chance.
She should! It's not like she lives far away either. You can literally see her apartment building from the bar. I think Marie is afraid of the feelings she might have for Jesse. After everything that's happened to her back home, she just wants to be left alone for a while. I doubt Jesse will let her be ignored like she wants. He could really do better dating someone who won't, like you said, leave at the end of the week. This should be fun to see how these two will play out!
Hehe, again, Saturday will appear in the next one, but I think everyone's in for a surprise....
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Me too dangit, bring on saturday!
DeleteOh fun, I love dragging it out like crazy sometimes.
DeletePoor Jesse. Maybe he has a chance with Marie after all. He's such an idiot but a sweet idiot if he doesn't run his mouth off. lol
ReplyDeleteLOL, 'run his mouth off'... He has very little brain-to-mouth filter action going on. Marie certainly won't be easy, but like someone said, 'game on!' That about sums it up cuz now he's curious and he wants out of this rut he's forming.
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Very amusing and insightful. Jesse seems like he may want to stop being a dodo-bird. Marie does seem very homesick. She just needs to remember why she left. Those two may be better off to find friendship with each other first rather than be rebounders. I guess Jesse would not consider himself one though. ^_^
ReplyDeleteLOL at 'dodo bird'. It's been a while since Marie was off at boarding school (followed by the longest teen years EVER!), so yes, she's really homesick since she's not used to being away anymore. You're right, she does need to remember why it is that she left. Marie may be the one screaming friendship, but it might take a lot to convince Jesse to leave it at that. I wonder how he'll react to news of the other three if Marie decides to tell him why. I don't know if he would consider himself a 'rebounder' or not. Truthfully, I haven't written that part for them yet, so I really don't know how he's going to react. Sometimes I write what I 'hear' going on in the characters' 'voices' kwim? :) He probably wouldn't consider himself one. He's so easy-going and optimistic I don't know if he has it in him (much) to be negative about the whole thing unless Marie really gets cruel.
DeleteThanks for making the wheels in my head turn!
Now how can Marie resist that boy-ishly handsome face?! It's nice to see a deeper side to Jesse- serious concern for the pain in Marie's eyes. Gotta read your other story now! See more into Marie's history. Hmmm Jesse being a rebound...maybe at first? Just to turn the tables on him a bit maybe? I think he needs someone to come along & knock him head over heels for a change- but not be cruel, I like him too much for that
ReplyDeleteLol, he is a cutie. 'Boyishly-handsome' is perfect! Thank you for also pointing out the concern he has for Marie's pained expression. He wants to find out where that came from. If you really want to know about Marie, the QoD blog has a tab on it for just her. Her problem is similar to Erin's. In fact, you could say it's Related even. (hehe)
DeleteI still don't know how they're going to play out when you get down to specifics like whether or not it's a rebound relationship, and if either of them will think that. That's, of course, if Jesse can somehow convince her. She's an emotional wreck right now, and she doesn't want another guy, even a really cute one, chasing her.
Hm, if this happens, I'm sure Marie knows plenty of ways she can Knock him head over heels lmao! Let's hope she's not too cruel if it comes to tht cuz I like him too. :-)
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Aww. I can see there's more to Jesse and I felt bad for him. He does silly things, but he apologized and was trying to be nice.. but I'm sure you already know that since you wrote it, lol! Long winded way of saying I like Jesse. ;)
ReplyDeleteOh, I completely understand long-winded!
DeletePoor Jesse just can't catch a break. He apologized, but as they say - you never get a second chance to make a first impression.
Aw, poor Jesse. He does seem kind of ready to pursue anything with tits (except Bernadette, lol), but it also seems like he could really care for Marie. Hopefully he'll be able to get past that first mistake and let Marie see who he really is.
ReplyDeleteI cracked up at the 'anything with tits' bit. Yeah, I guess you can't call 'em skirt-chasers per se since women don't always wear skirts anymore. Oh well, the term can still apply.
DeleteYeah, hopefully he'll get the chance to show that he's not just your friendly, neighborhood womanizer. :)
This was entertaining :-) Jesse is so lost when it comes to just being his normal decent self. Like he's never known an intelligent woman before. I hope Marie teaches him a couple of things.
ReplyDeleteMust continue reading, can't wait for Saturday and Bryce/Erin!
Jesse got a little too used to that smile and charm get him almost any girl he wants. Thing is, most of those girls were girls looking for a vacation/holiday fling and that's all. He certainly fit that bill and played that game very well.
DeleteNot saying he hasn't done the serious route. It's just for the past few years he's only had 'serious' (yeah, right) after 'fun'.
Saturday is great. :)
Jesse was a douche at first, but him and Marie are really cute together. Shame on Bryce for leaving her when it was so crowded though lol.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, we got to see the bad side of Jesse first. :( He really is a sweetheart. Yes, he and Marie make a cute couple.:-)
DeleteLol Bryce had other things on his mind, and he figured the other two could handle it.
Blimey, poor Jesse! He's actually trying pretty hard to apologise, and he means it, too! This was a really nice chapter, it gave some good insight into Jesse's thick head ^^
ReplyDeleteVery thick head indeed. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
DeleteCrazy free willed sims, out to change the plot on their own agenda. Ha! Poor Bernadette. That girl must bathe in eau de fou. Lol
ReplyDeleteJesse needs a hard lesson in love, and I bet Marie would do very well teaching him. It might take time though, and he doesn't seem like the type to have a ton of patience. Perhaps I'll cross my fingers and hope the knuckle head knuckles under.
Yes, at this point, it was still mostly gameplay-first. I had it all set to free will to see what they'd do. Oh, I used a few poses, too, of course, but in those scenes, I let them run amuck. Bernadette is very amuck.
DeleteJesse not have a ton of patience? LOL. Don't tell him that, even if it's true. He thinks he IS patient.